After attending the Frances Upritchard Jealous Saboteurs exhibition at City Gallery, our class linked their poetic descriptions to some items on display. Here are some of our creative poems!
Clear and murky glass.
Sat on rusty metal poles.
Bulbous bonsai trees
By Kelly
I am half creative.
And half of a sports
Object.
And I hurt people.
By Rove
Ancient, Forgotten.
It’s back, From the afterlife.
Realistic eye.
By Anna
Sad sloth lying dead.
Lonely sloth creeping me out.
Dead sloth stealing rings.
By Zak
Our time is up now,
Sad face and why and how
I cannot rhyme now.
By Michael Lau
Skinny slow sloth thing
Mysterious but cool too
Kind of like a rat
Colourful paintings
I’m not so sure what they are
Makes you say wowwee
By Siena
I see a mummy
Treasure, relic mystery
Lady so scary
By Anthea
White eyes no pupil
The shape looks like a dead ant
He will steal your rings
I have a nice twin
I light up like a light bulb
I can light your room.
I have lots of stripes
My toes are short and stubby.
Purple and yellow.
By Holly
Ever green is cool
melanistic means black
melanistic lion
By Tom
Animals are cool
Hand made is the baboon, cool
Yet it is so strange.
By Tom
Slow and suspicious
Clumpy fur and half a face
Styley yet slouchy
By Eve
From sport to creature
sharp teeth, glooming eyes, ripped up
Wow! Crocodile
By Eve
Sloths are slow and soft
Until they fall to the ground
They like to hang from branches
Leaves are their favourite
By Mia
Look suspicious skulls.
They are decapitated.
Oh unlucky guy.
By Sean
Sitting on a chair.
With his arms up in the air.
Brown, furry with some gloves
By Sam
I have a nice twin.
I light up like the light bulb.
I can light your room.
By Holly
After the bucket
Wrapped to the very top
Lying down to rest
By Meggy (mummy)
Scary old Hairy
Skull. Is sweaty bloody stand
Creepy skull
By Hannah
Yoza yoza yo sitting on a
Chair his arms up in the air
Brown, furry with some gloves
By Sam
Happy high hippy
sitting alone
On the wall
a rainbow farted
By Benson
Like a mouldy poo lying dead
On the cold ground run over
By a car
By Benson
He’s been ran over
Motorcycle killed a sloth
he is lying dead
By Sean
Skull scary sad Hypnotised
Head crocodile creepy clay
Crinkly Bubbly bush
Bonzai Botanical
By Seraphine
Dark shelf of potions
Generating fear and all
Are standing so still
By William
Sloths are slow and
soft They hover
in the tree
tops sleeping, eating
By Renee
Faces still as stone
staring back at those who look
never turning back
By Renee
Sloths are slow and soft
Sloths like to hang from branches
Until they fall down.
Leaves are their favourite food
By Charmaine
Skinny, Boney and
sly much colourful,
Bright and funky walking all the way
“Funky feet!!”
By Meggy
After the bucket wrapped to the very top
Lying down to vest
“Mummy”
By Meggy
Make a Haiku
Lady wants to see our Face
Alliteration really
crazy sloth recent
Trip to the thrift shop having an action
Such a pointy nose supports the welsh ruby team
She does not approve old indian guy
He has a really cracked face he needs some suncream
I saw a red sheep, body was inside the he must of had cramp
By Matthew Wood
YEAR 7’s writers club
The leaves depart from the decrepit tree, the breeze executing the victims as the equivalent wrinkled, frayed leaves plunge to the ground.
By Fleur
More to follow!
Some very creative poems, keep up the fantastic writting.
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