Thursday, 16 June 2016

SIMU's Haiku's, From our City Gallery, trip. Art meets po'try!

After attending the Frances Upritchard Jealous Saboteurs exhibition at City Gallery, our class linked their poetic descriptions to some items on display. Here are some of our creative poems!


Clear and murky glass.
Sat on rusty metal poles.
Bulbous bonsai trees

By Kelly


I am half creative.
And half of a sports
Object.
And I hurt people.

By Rove


Ancient, Forgotten.  
It’s back, From the afterlife.
Realistic eye.  
By Anna

Sad sloth lying dead.
Lonely sloth creeping me out.
Dead sloth stealing rings.

By Zak


Our time is up now,
Sad face and why and how
I cannot rhyme now.

By Michael Lau

Skinny slow sloth thing
Mysterious but cool too
Kind of like a rat

Colourful paintings
I’m not so sure what they are
Makes you say wowwee
By Siena

I see a mummy
Treasure, relic mystery
Lady so scary
By Anthea

White eyes no pupil
The shape looks like a dead ant
He will steal your rings

I have a nice twin
I light up like a light bulb
I can light your room.

I have lots of stripes
My toes are short and stubby.
Purple and yellow.
By Holly

Ever green is cool
melanistic means black
melanistic lion

By Tom

Animals are cool
Hand made is the baboon, cool
Yet it is so strange.

By Tom

Slow and suspicious
Clumpy fur and half a face
Styley yet slouchy

By Eve

From sport to creature
sharp teeth, glooming eyes, ripped up
Wow! Crocodile

By Eve

Sloths are slow and soft
Until they fall to the ground
They like to hang from branches
Leaves are their favourite

By Mia


Look suspicious skulls.
They are decapitated.
Oh unlucky guy.

By Sean


Sitting on a chair.
With his arms up in the air.
Brown, furry with some gloves

By Sam


I have a nice twin.
I light up like the light bulb.
I can light your room.

By Holly


After the bucket
Wrapped to the very top
Lying down to rest

By Meggy (mummy)

Scary old Hairy
Skull.  Is sweaty bloody stand
Creepy skull

By Hannah

Yoza yoza yo sitting on a
Chair his arms up in the air
Brown, furry with some gloves

By Sam

Happy high hippy
sitting alone
On the wall
a rainbow farted
By Benson

Like a mouldy poo lying dead
On the cold ground run over
By a car
By Benson

He’s been ran over
Motorcycle killed  a sloth
he is lying dead

By Sean

Skull scary sad Hypnotised
Head crocodile creepy clay
Crinkly Bubbly bush
Bonzai Botanical

By Seraphine

Dark shelf of potions
Generating fear and all
Are standing so still

By William

Sloths are slow and
soft They hover
in the tree
tops sleeping, eating

By Renee

Faces still as stone
staring back at those who look
never turning back

By Renee

Sloths are slow and soft
Sloths like to hang from branches
Until they fall down.
Leaves are their favourite food
By Charmaine

Skinny, Boney and
sly much colourful,
Bright and funky walking all the way
“Funky feet!!”

By Meggy

After the bucket wrapped to the very top
Lying down to vest
“Mummy”

By Meggy

Make a Haiku
Lady wants to see our Face
Alliteration really
crazy sloth recent
Trip to the thrift shop having an action
Such a pointy nose supports the welsh ruby team
She does not approve old indian guy
He has a really cracked face he needs some suncream
I saw a red sheep, body was inside the he must of had cramp

By Matthew Wood

YEAR 7’s writers club

The leaves depart from the decrepit tree, the breeze executing the victims as the equivalent wrinkled, frayed leaves plunge to the ground.
By Fleur

More to follow!






1 comment:

  1. Some very creative poems, keep up the fantastic writting.

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